Written by the author on 2/10/2015
Hello, as the title suggests, it’s been a while since I last responded to comments.
Looking at it, it’s been over a month since the previous comment reply…
The comments have piled up. But I’m happy. Really happy.
Even though I haven’t replied, I’ve read all the comments.
They are very encouraging, and there are many parts that make me think, ‘Oh, I see.’
The reports about typos are also very helpful. I’m a lousy author who hasn’t done proofreading.
At the very least, the fact that such a fickle author has been able to continue writing until now is thanks to the comments, bookmarks, evaluations, and all the readers. Also, thanks to Ann.
Since I can’t reply to all of them, I’ll pick a few and respond.
It will be from the part after the previous comment reply, so there may be comments like, ‘Which comment is this?’ Please forgive me. (From around the end of August…) In terms of chapters, it’s the comments from the Chapter 19 to the Side Story 11.
Yeah, I’m really sorry for not being able to reply.
Here are the comment replies:
・No matter how many times the protagonist is on the verge of death, he’s still the protagonist, right…
That’s right. In a sense, he can be considered the most “unchanging” character.
You could also say that it’s okay for the protagonist to be like that…
・Una, who seemed reliable, is unexpectedly clumsy…
・O-Oh… Una, scary with her contempt for humans…
・Una’s idiocy is just like her parents.
・She keeps saying ‘kill, kill,’ it’s too dangerous, lol.
It’s inevitable that Una is clumsy. After all, her source material is like that.
About ‘Black Fang Hyena’:
・Why does such a nice person speak like they’re from the end of the century…
・That mohawk was really cool, lol.
Honestly, the response was amazing.
They will probably continue to appear from now on.
・The few lines in the afterword were the most interesting
……………………I know, right!
・I want data like the heroines’ three sizes. I’m mommy milkers kind of guy, but I’m tolerant of flat chest believers.
Una: “It’s troublesome, shall I kill you?”
Tres: “What are three sizes?”
Elibel: “Oh my, naughty boy~. Per-vert-ed~. Well, fine, I’ll tell… Hey, Berg! What are you doi-ng.”
About Paldi and ‘Silver Crow’:
・That was the last time the people saw them.
・The temperature difference between adventurers and earth dragons is awful.
・It’s clearly a death flag.
・They were really adding flavor, but…
It was the only story so far where the dungeon was working.
Even though their deaths were predetermined, they are people I have affection for.
About Earth Dragon’s dream:
・Are you sure you can’t eat fishnet stockings?
・Fishnet stockings… Can you eat them? _(┐「ε:)_
・What kind of dream is Earth Dragon having, lolololol
・Fishnet stockings are a drink. Non-perverted people wouldn’t understand.
・What the hell is ‘crab miso knee socks’? lololol
・Will the author realize that they have to write a nonsensical story about a beautiful girl (ant) wearing grilled skewers with miso sauce-flavored fishnet stockings?… If it were me, I would do it, lol.
I’ll do it, even on hiatus! I wrote it, but I got really worried and anxious about what was going on in my head, you know!
Oh well… it seems like everyone, including me, is crazy…
About Ann in Side Story 3 – 11:
・Ann, you’re not just a hard worker, you’re a hard existence!
・The Dungeon Struggle of Ann (；・ω・)
・Yeah, let’s change the story’s title to ‘Ann’s Dungeon Struggle!’
・Ann is so endearing………((つд⊂)
・Ann’s efforts are ruined by the nonsense of the lazy dragon (laughs)
・Ann-chan should be the main character already, lol
Ann’s popularity is really amazing. Even though she’s an ant…
Around this time, I feel like Earth Dragon started being called useless dragon, lazy dragon, and NEET dragon.
You could say that she’s a character who is changing completely in the opposite direction of Earth.
About Earth Dragon in Side Story 3 – 11:
・Earth Dragon?! How is it possible for a wild animal not to wake up when it hears an explosion?
・Oi, useless dragon lol
・Earth Dragon isn’t really making an effort, huh?
・Earth Dragon isn’t playing the role of the protagonist, huh?
・All he does is eat magic stones, create subordinates, and sleep.
・Earth Dragon? I don’t know that kid.
・Stop it! Earth Dragon’s popularity is already zero!
Um… well… um. Yeah. In the beginning, he was working hard with the dungeon and golems and all… Recently… um. Well. Yeah, I guess… Well, the author can’t dislike him. I like him.
In the next chapter, he will work hard to create a dungeon again. Probably.
About Heleb in Side Story 3 – 11:
・Is it just me or he looks like the golden Gilgamesh?
・Geez, this king is too arrogant.
・To a certain golden shine, “What is a king without pride?”
・Accurate Crow is seriously AUO (a variation of Eiyū-ō which means Hero King and also the nickname of Gilgamesh).
・I started liking him after he got serious.
I think it’s inevitable for strong people to be arrogant.
Because they have built up themselves until then, strong people tend to become arrogant. That’s why he looks cool when he gives his all.
・Damn it, I want Ann-chan to say ‘Ku-koro (just kill me)’ to me…!
Ann: “Ku-koro… What does that mean?” (Tilts head)
About the agreement between Ann, Heleb, and Gwyve:
・Stirring up a hornet’s nest. They seem likely to cooperate and destroy a country.
In reality, if these three races teamed up and attacked, they could destroy a country.
However, none of them are interested in invasion or conquest. Hunting for food and such is a different matter.
That’s all for the comment replies up to Ann’s Side Story.
I want to gradually respond to comments from Chapter 33 onward.
In Chapter 53 onward, it’s the dungeon-making again after Earth Dragon’s rehabilitation in a state of withdrawal.
Well then, please continue to support ‘The Dungeon of an Earth Dragon!’
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